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Norris Language Department


 

 

Mrs. Boon

Email:  nicole.boon@norris160.org

 

ENGL 1010                                                  Norris High School/Room S-2 Office Hours:  8:-8:25 am                                  Period: 2A 9:25-10:55 am

                   11:00-11:50 am

                   3:30-4:00 M-W-F

 

Course Information:  Fall Semester 2009

Start Date:  August 14th      

End Date:   December 18th  

 

Required Texts:

·         Reid, Stephen. The Prentice Hall Guide For College Writers 8th Edition.  Prentice Hall

·         Lunsford, Andrea. The Everyday Writer, 4rd Edition. Bedford.

·         A current, quality dictionary and thesaurus—

 

Class Policy and Rules:

School rules are listed in the student handbook/planner and will be adhered to in this class.  My own class policies are listed below. Ignorance is not an excuse—I expect you to be aware of all rules at all times.

 

Tardiness:

You are late when the bell rings and you are not in your seat ready to go, regardless of what I am doing. If you come late to class—have a PASS from your previous teacher, from the office, from the nurse, etc., in your hand.

·         Late 1x = 15 minute detention

·         Late 2x = 30 minute detention

·         Late 3x = 45 minute detention and email/phone call home to parents

·         Late 4x = well, you don’t want to be late a fourth time…

 

Food and Drink:

Absolutely no open top containers will be allowed in class, but you may have a screw top lid like a water or soda bottle. Absolutely no food.  Eat breakfast, snacks, lunch, etc., before entering my room.  If you have food in my classroom—expect penalties, like detentions, loss of daily points, emails home to parents, similar to being late, or violating any other class policies

 

IAP Periods:

If  you would like to meet with me during the IAP period (11:00-11:50) you must

either set an appointment with me prior to the start of IAP on that day, or you must

have your IAP teacher call to see if I am available to conference with you. 

I may have other students who have already received a pass.  Once in IAP, I expect

you to follow both school policies and my own.

 

 

 

 

Preparation:

You are expected to be prepared with all materials necessary for the day’s activities:  pen and or pencil, a journal notebook or loose paper, both of your textbooks, and anything else I have asked you to bring for class.  You should be prepared with any reading or other assigned work.      

·         First offense without proper materials = 15 minute detention

·         Second offense = 30 minute detention

·         Third offense = 45 minute detention and email/phone call home to parents.

·         Fourth offense = please don’t do this a fourth time.

 

Homework:  All assignments are due when I call for them so be prepared. An assignment is not completed if it is not ready to go when called for.  Do not ask to go print typed work; it will be late.  

 

Work Expectations:

Sloppy work (work that does not follow format guidelines or looks like you used it for a doormat) will be returned immediately and not graded until expectations are met.  Work must be organized, neat, not crimpled.  If you turn in an assignment on time, but it is raggedy, then you have until the end of that school day to turn in a respectable copy without late penalty.

 

Rewrite Policy: 

Your major essays may be revised once for an improved grade.  You will have approximately one week from the time I return papers to get in your rewrite.  You must attach the rubric and original to your revised copy or I will not accept the rewrite at that time.  Late papers will not be eligible for rewrites.

 

Late Policy: 

If your paper is late, i.e. not in my hand or the bucket when it’s due, then you can only receive “passing credit” for the assignment, which is 65%.  You have 1 week to turn in your assignment—which must be of “passing quality” in order to get credit.  After the one week deadline, a grade of “0” will go into the book.  Therefore, get ALL assignments in on time.  However…

·         Because I realize that “life” gets in the way of even our best laid out plans, I will allow each student ONE extension per quarter, but this must be arranged and approved by me ON or PRIOR to the due date. 

·         My willingness to extend your deadline will be on an individual circumstance basis. 

·         If you are ill on the due date, you must see me ASAP to make arrangements to turn in your piece.

·         You can always email your assignment from home or give it to a friend to turn in for you.

·         If you will be absent for a school activity, vacation, etc., your assignment is due before you go.

·         AND, any student who does NOT turn in his/her paper on time MUST fill out a “student responsibility report” staying what homework is missing, why it’s missing, and when the assignment will be turned in.  This report will be filled out by the student and turned in with the assignment on the agreed date.

 

Other Class work:

You may not do work from other classes in my class.  The result will be a detention.  Ignorance is not an excuse, therefore, “I didn’t know” won’t work.

 

Missing Class:

If you are going to miss my class for whatever reason, it is your responsibility to get all assignments in to me on time.  I will NOT chase you down, but I will remind you once.

 

Attendance Policies:

Students are required to follow guidelines set by Norris High School in regards to attendance.  If students will miss a class due to illness, extra-curricular activities, or family reasons, they are responsible for contacting me in advance, if possible, in regards to their situation and class work.  If students cannot meet with me prior to their absence, then they should do so as soon as possible upon returning to school.  If students are repeatedly absent and miss over 30% of the class (about 11-12 class periods), it is possible that they will not get passing credit for the course; exceptions might be due, but not limited to, extreme illness or if students have made arrangements with Norris High School and with me.  Note: I will not chase you down if you miss class; you are responsible for seeing me.

 

What kind of writing will we be doing?

We will be writing essays, mostly, but will be doing other smaller writing projects to help you define and express your ideas.  You will write about society or your life, providing enough “meat” for you to write a 4 page paper.  We will be learning vocabulary words and using them in context.  Finally, you will be writing in your journals, almost every day, which will serve as a way for you to share your ideas with me in private, or to hash out your ideas for your essay topics.  The only way to become a better writer is to write. 

 

Writing Workshops

A workshop is class time in which you read other students’ papers and they read yours.  These workshops are valuable opportunities for you to get your work looked over before you turn it in, and also to find out exactly what a reader needs for your paper to be a successful and meaningful piece.  Workshop grades are based on participation, a willingness to read anyone’s paper, and effective feedback.

 

Smarthinking.com

Smarthinking.com is a free service provided by SCC.  You will be required to submit every major essay to Smarthinking for instructor review and feedback.  This is SCC’s writing center and an opportunity for you to get feedback from another instructor to help improve your writing.  You must submit to me a copy of the instructor’s feedback so I can review comments and give you credit for doing so—so plan ahead.  Turn around time is two days.  A smarthinking.com handout is at the end of this syllabus.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Journals:

I will assign journal entries which will be written in class.  Journals should be thought of as “idea notebooks” or safe places for you to record notes and impressions, grapple with difficult issues, respond to the essays in the text and generate ideas for the more formal writing assignments.  Journals are a place where there are no right or wrong answers—just a place for you to record and work through your raw and initial feelings/ideas.  Don’t worry about grammar or spelling either—save that for your polished pieces.  Journals are graded daily, this grade will be based on addressing the prompt, providing originality of thought, and meeting the length requirement.  Journals are 10% of your overall grade.

 

Analytical Cover Memos

An ACM will need to be completed for each of the major essays.  The ACM provides a chance to explain the writing process and creation of the piece.  The writer will, in a one page minimum, double spaced, cover memo explain their frustrations, successes, excitement, worries, drafting, revising, provide background information, etc.- anything and everything they feel is necessary to share about their piece before it is read.  Students must identify their purpose and their audience.  This ACM is informally written, like a journal entry would be- conversational.  ACMs are graded on the level of reflection and self-analysis of the writing process.

 

Methods of Evaluation

Course grades will be based on class and group participation, daily work, revisions, and final drafts.  See Teacher Rubric at end to see how papers will be evaluated by both teacher and student. 

bullet 5 essays each including an Analytical Cover Memo  (totaling 25 finished/polished pages) One of the essays will include an introduction to the idea of intellectual property/incorporating voices/information from outside sources and use MLA to document 2-3 sources used in the paper. (This is NOT a “research paper”) 70% of total course grade
bullet Journals- collection of informal writing that focuses on exploration of writing and/or discussion of assigned readings (20-40 total pages over the course of the semester) 10% of total grade
bullet In-class work: workshopping, vocabulary quizzes, writing projects, grammar assignments, daily participation, and/or additional homework. 15% of total course grade
bullet Final Shared In-Class Essay using standard prompt 5% of total course grade

 

Class Expectations:  Below, class expectations are clearly outlined.  You will be evaluated during the semester for in-class work.  You start with 30/30 points—but that can drop depending on your work in class—it can also go up with positive participation, but will not exceed 30 points.  (This is part of the in-class work mentioned above in “Methods of Evaluation”).

         

Ø  Listening and Critiquing

I expect you to be an active and attentive listener at all times, listening with purpose that compliments or adds to the quality of the classroom discussion or atmosphere. I expect you to follow directions and listen with attention to your teacher and to your peers and respond in a respectful, mature manner.  I expect you to listen accurately and listen critically, then answer rationally to an argument, avoiding hasty conclusions and recognizing prejudice when it occurs.  Finally, I expect you to appreciate cultural, social, and personal differences among the people in our class.

 

Ø  Speaking:

I expect you to speak in turn, while actively volunteering to speak in class; you discuss, rather than try to “ram home” your own single-minded idea;  you encourage and acknowledge others’ right to speak and do not monopolize all of the “air time.” You speak in time and do not “fog” the class atmosphere with unnecessary side chatter or conversation off the topic; you tell personal experiences; argue constructively and logically; speak with appropriate volume and emotion. When appropriate, you debate; speak in concrete or in abstract terms; speak sensitively according to cultural norms and audience.

 

Ø  Class Membership:  The Complete, Successful Student:

I expect you to combine all of the above descriptors with the intangible skills that contribute to the mutual benefit of all class members:  I expect you to stay on task and not be susceptible to the distractions of electronic temptations.  You are able to be flexible and absorb the shocks and setbacks of classroom life--pick yourself up and go on when things go awry. You provide great feedback and participate in deep conversation over assignments that are done to the best of your ability. You give meaningful, substantive, expressive, and clear thoughts about classroom issues; you contribute. You refuse to be distracted by irrelevant issues and or destructive behaviors and will not let others detract from your learning. You strive to be the best you can be. 

 

Incompletes:

A grade of incomplete is only considered for students who have completed at least 80% of the coursework, are in passing standing, and under exceptional circumstances. Incompletes must be negotiated prior to the end of the term and completed within the first two weeks of the following term.

 

Drops/Incompletes:

Please be aware that I will not drop you from class if you stop showing up. If you choose to drop, it is your responsibility to do so with Mr. Carlson ASAP and then notify me so that we can contact SCC regarding your decision.

 

Academic Integrity

Academic integrity is one of the basic principles of a college community. Norris encourages and expects the highest standards of academic honesty from all students.  Please note that cheating, plagiarism, or other forms of academic dishonesty are monitored and subject to disciplinary action, which will, at minimum, include a meeting with Mr. Skretta, Mr. Carlson, me, and a phone call to your parents.  Any papers found to be plagiarized or have parts that are plagiarized will receive a grade of “0” with no option for rewrite.

 

To assist in helping students learn about plagiarism and how to avoid it, or recognize it, we will be using www.turnitin.com in class—this is a program used by many colleges, including SCC, that allows instructors and students to scan papers for any plagiarism.

 

Schedule: 

Assignments are due on the date listed, so please come ready to class with everything prepared.  Always have your Prentice Hall Guide for College Writers with you as we will be discussing the readings and using many of the activities in the book.  Also have your Everyday Writer with you because we will use it through the marking period for review and to address any problems with your writing.  AND, please pay attention in class and check with your friends—reading assignments are subject to change due to school schedule, snow days etc, and ultimately, YOU are responsible for knowing when assignments are due.

 

Day 1:  Thurs August 14th

Thurs.          Review Syllabus/Discussion of Writing Process 

Journal #1

 

Week 1:  August 17th

Mon:            Intro: Writing Project: About Me

Journal #2

Due:  PHG: Chapter 1

 

Wed:           Due:  PHG pp. 18-33

                        Journal #3

                            

Fri:              Due: PHG 34-48

Vocabulary Quiz #1: Words 1-20

 

Week 2:  August 24th  

 

Tues:            Writing Project #1 Due

                   Intro Paper #1: Personal Narrative

                        DUE: PHG 101-108

 

             

Thurs:          Journal #4

                   Due: PHG 109-116

 

Week 3:  August 31st

Mon:                     Journal #5

                   DUE: PHG 117-124  

         

Wed:           Journal #6

                        DUE: PHG 126-129

 

Fri:                  Vocabulary Quiz #2: Words 141-160

                        PHG 142-145

 

Week 4:  September 7th (Labor Day)

                   

Wed:           Journal #7

                        DUE: PHG 145-148

 

Fri:                  Workshop: Paper #1

 

 

Week 5:   September 14th

 

Tues:            Paper #1 Due

                        Intro Paper #2: Shaping Spaces

 

Thurs:                   Journal #8

                   Due: PHG 51-58

 

Week 6:  September 21st

Mon:           Journal #9

                        DUE: PHG 60-64

                       

Wed:           Vocabulary Quiz #3: Words 201-220

                        DUE: PHG 66-73

 

Fri:              Journal #10

                        DUE: PHG 90-95

 

Week 7:  September 28th  Homecoming week!

 

Tues:           Journal #11

                        DUE: PHG 96-99

 

Thurs:          Workshop Paper #2       

 

Week 8:  October 5th  

 

Mon:           Paper #2 Due

                   Intro Paper #3: Evaluation

                        DUE: PHG 399-408

 

Wed:           Vocabulary Quiz #4: Words 301-320

                        DUE: PHG 408-412

 

Fri:               Journal #12

                        DUE: PHG 414-419

 

 

Week 9:   October 12th   

 

Tues:           Journal #13

                                    DUE: PHG 419-428

 

Fall Break:   October 15th and 16th

 

Week 10:   October  19th

 

Mon:           Journal #14

                   DUE: PHG 441-450

 

 

Wed:           Vocabulary Quiz #5: Words 421-440

                        DUE: PHG 451-453

 

Fri:              Workshop Paper #3

 

Week 11:   October 26th

 

Tues:           Paper #3 Due

                   Intro Paper #4: Explaining

 

Thurs:          Journal #15

                        DUE: PHG 343-352

                       

Week 12:   November 2nd

 

Mon:                     Journal #16

                        DUE: PHG 355-360

 

Wed:                     Journal #17

                        DUE: PHG 361-367

 

Fri:              Vocabulary Quiz #6: Words 461-480

                   DUE: PHG 386-393

 

Week 13:  November 9th  

 

Tues:           Journal #18

                        DUE: PHG 394-396

                            

Thurs:                   Workshop Paper #4

 

Week 14:  November 16th

Mon:           Paper #4 Due

                   Intro Paper #5: Position Paper

                        DUE: PHG 509-525

 

Wed:           Review Effective Research

                   Review MLA Citations

 

Fri:                  Journal #19

                   DUE: PHG 527-532

 

Week 15:  November 23rd   (Thanksgiving Break)

 

Tues:            Vocabulary Quiz #7: Words 501-520

                   DUE: PHG 534-539

 

Week 16:  November 30th   

 

Tues:           Journal #20

                   DUE: PHG 540-566

 

Thurs:                   Journal #21

                        DUE: PHG 583-598

                  

Week 17:  December 7th

Mon:                     Workshop Paper #5

 

Wed:           Vocabulary Quiz #8: Words 601-620

Discuss Shared In-Class Essay

 

Fri:               Paper #5 Due

                   Shared In-Class Essay

 

Week 18:  December 14th

          Tues:           Journal #22

Intro: Vocabulary Review Write

         

          Thurs:                   Journal #23

Vocabulary Review Write Due

 

Week 19:  December 21st

         

          Mon:  SCC has finished the quarter- so technically, we don’t have class this day.  But- you cannot be here, leave, and then come back.  If you do not have class period 1AB, or if you do not have class 3AB, 4A, and 5A you may be able to receive a release for this period.  If you have other classes- plan to bring something to work on in class this day.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

English 1010 Pet Peeve Words and Forbidden Phrases:

 

Many students throughout the history of this course have been shocked and surprised at the extensive list of words that I will not allow in your writing.  You can try to sneak them in, and in some instances, like quotes and use of “voice” they are necessary, however, 90% of the time, I will circle them in your paper and ask that you change your wording and phrasing.

 

Why?

 

These words are too common and too simple for you to be using as a high school senior who is taking a college course, and one who will be leaving and going off on your own, into the world of complexity and competition.  You must learn how to use the power of language, of vocabulary, to express your ideas (which are important and valuable) in the best and most “mature” way possible.  Therefore, we will be leaving these “7th grade words” behind us during this course (no offense to 7th graders, of course). 

I have a list posted in the front of the room, but below is a list for your ease of reference while working on assignments:

 

Pet Peeve Words:

Happy                          Mad                 Sad                  Bad                  Glad                Very    

Really                          So                    A lot                Things             You                  Stuff Gotten                            Got                        Hard                Fun                  Good               Big

*This                           *It                     *That         

*can be used if has direct antecedent           

**any word that is used repeatedly, in repetition, may be circled as well to teach you to vary your use of vocabulary                       

 

Forbidden Phrases:

There is                       There are         This is              That is             Sort of             Kind of

 

And use only sparingly:     

I feel                            I believe           I think                        In my opinion

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Grading Guidelines for Papers

 

The “A” and “A+”

A’s are reserved for outstanding work.  Papers that earn A’s address all of the requirements and guidelines for the assignment thoroughly and thoughtfully.  They show a high level of critical thinking on the subject matter at hand and the ideas they address are developed clearly and fully.  “A” writing shows excellent control over language and organization, reads fluently and coherently, contains very few sentence level errors, and follows MLA formatting and documentation guidelines (as is illustrated in our Everyday Writer).  “A” papers show a striving to explore solutions to questions and problems and do so with sound logic.  “A” papers have a strong sense of audience and purpose. Please note that “A+” grades are awarded only for writing that is highly sophisticated in terms of thought, logic, and language use (and it is possible for you to earn an A+ with the rewrite option!)

 

“B”

B’s are awarded for very good work.  Papers that earn B’s address the requirements and guidelines for the assignments, though some spots may be more thinly developed.  They show an admirable level of critical thinking on the topic—beyond surface considerations.  “B” writing shows solid control over language and organization, through there may be room for improvement.  “B” writing also generally reads smoothly (though may have a few rough spots), is generally mechanically clean, and follows MLA formatting and documentation guidelines.  “B” papers might not push themselves to explore answers to obstacles and ambiguities or might use questionable logic in doing so.  “B” papers might have a more fuzzy sense of purpose and audience.

 

“C”

C’s are earned for good work.  Papers that earn “C’s” make honest efforts at understanding and meeting the guidelines and requirements for the assignments, though may fall short in meeting them all.  They show some critical thinking, but often stop short at addressing the more surface considerations of the topic at hand.  “C” writing can show inconsistent control over language and organization, and may read a bit choppy or disjointed.  “C” writing may also be the result of a significant amount of sentence level and mechanical errors or show no consideration of proper MLS formatting style.  “C” papers tend not to push themselves when they are unsure.  “C” papers might have a fuzzy sense of audience and purpose.  “C” papers do not exhibit ALL of these weaknesses at once.  That would make a “D” paper.

 

“I” or “F”

Papers earn “I’s” when they miss the mark on or ignore most of the requirements and guidelines for an assignment.  They show minimal critical thinking and offer just a cursory treatment of the topic.  Writing may exhibit a lack of control over language and organization, may not read fluently or coherently, and/or may have numerous sentence level and mechanical errors or no regard for the MLA format.  “I” papers do not push themselves, and may have no sense of purpose and audience.  Students who receive “I’s” or “F’s” on papers should visit with me for writing assistance on this and future assignments.

 

 

 

Sample Rubric:  Will be modified to fit specific papers

 

Criteria

Advanced (A)

Proficient (B)

Progressing (C)

Beginning (D-F)

Ideas and Content

 

 

*supporting details are rich, interesting, and full.

*clever content, profound

*details are relevant and appropriate for the audience and focus

*paper clearly conveys author’s opinion and purpose.

*paper meets and/or exceeds length requirements

*details are strong but lack richness and specificity.

*details are somewhat relevant and appropriate for the audience and focus

*paper creates a general understanding of the author’s opinion and purpose.

*paper just meets length requirements

*Details are vague

*Some details may be repetitive.

*paper creates a limited understanding of the author’s opinion and purpose.

*paper digresses or gets off to topic.

*paper is short of length requirement

*Details lack elaboration.

 

*Some details do not support the focus

 

*Important details are left out.

 

*No presentation of the writer’s opinion.

 

*paper is too brief to grade

Organization

 

 

*carefully but subtly organized from beginning to end.

*clear focus and logical order

*effective intro, body, and conclusion.

*profound/evident thesis

*transitions clearly and cleverly show how ideas connect.

*Organized, but may have minor lapses in order or structure—still focused, but not clever or powerful in ordering.

*has intro, body, conclusion.

*sound thesis

*transitions are generally effective.

*Focus is unclear or limited.

*missing one or more of following: intro, body, and/or conclusion—or if present, are vague

*attempt at thesis or missing thesis

*transitions are repetitive, boring, or at times, missing.

*Unfocused

 

*thought patterns are difficult to follow

 

*no identifiable structure

 

*no thesis statement

 

*transitions are missing

Style (voice, word choice, sentence fluency)

 

 

*is individualistic, expressive, and engaging

*uses language that is interesting, specific, and natural

*effectively uses vivid words

*sentence variety enhances style and effect

*successfully uses more sophisticated sentence patterns.

*no interruption of fluency—easy to read and enjoy, beginning to end.

*is somewhat individualistic, expressive, and engaging.

*generally uses tone appropriate for purpose and audience

*uses some rich language

*uses some vivid words

*uses sentences that vary somewhat in length and structure

*fluency is occasionally interrupted

*is seldom individualistic, expressive, or engaging

*generally lacks tone appropriate for purpose and audience.

*little attempt to use rich language

* misuse of some words

*uses few vivid words

*little sentence variety

*fluency is significantly interrupted.

*is not individualistic, expressive, or engaging

*lacks tone appropriate for purpose and audience

*uses language that is not specific and that displays too many misused or overused words/phrases.

*limited vocabulary that is simplistic

*no sentence variety or length

 *serious errors in usage

*fluency is impaired by poor sentence structure

Conventions (grammar and mechanics)

 

 

*paragraphing is sound

 

*mechanics and usage are

 correct

 

*very few or no errors

 

*minimal pet peeve words

*attempts at paragraphing are mostly successful, but some are short , undeveloped, or too long

*mechanics and usage is mostly correct

*few errors that are somewhat distracting

*a few pet peeve words

*paragraphing, if used, is weak

*errors appear frequently in mechanics and usage

*errors distract from complete comprehension of piece

*pet peeve words everywhere

*paragraphing is missing or irregular

*errors in mechanics and usage disable the reader from gaining any true comprehension.

*pet peeve city!

Students Responsibility Report for Late Assignments

 

Student Name: ____________________________               Today’s Date: ____________

Assignment Title: __________________________               Due Date: _______________

This paper was not completed on time because ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

Date of paper submission __________________________________________________

I understand that according to Mrs. Boon’s class policy regarding late assignments, this paper will receive a grade of no more than a 65%.  I also understand that I did not ask for assistance, for an extension, or did not contact her prior to the due date/time, and therefore, take responsibility for this late assignment.

Furthermore, I acknowledge that if I do not have this paper in to Mrs. Boon within one week, that a grade of zero will be entered permanently into the grade book.

 

 

 

Signed: ________________________________________   Date: ________________

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